Board Thread:News and Announcements/@comment-15636815-20131111185541/@comment-15529092-20131127094639

I made just 1 change in last 24 hours (import of introduction text for chapter 1). I kept your original text with one exception = 'as shown in the image right'. I would welcome to avoid using these 'show in the image' phrases in general, beacuse:


 * They are stating something which is clearly obvious.


 * They are making texts unnecessarily longer (and they are quite long already). Btw., in general: whenever I am reviewing text on page and making edit I am always thinking about reasonable ways how to make its text as short as possible (with keeping all relevant information). Especially in cases this will helps to cut some line from overall length.


 * And last of all, consistency (I haven't noticed anything like this approach elsewhere).